Story Line?

Think of a fantastic anime plot. Lots of anime plots are based on every day life, such as high school situations and romances. However, some of them revolve around adventure and justice, such as the aforementioned extremely popular Dragonball Z series. Whatever style of story you would like to write, make sure that the characters are fun and endearing. An anime comic can be about almost anything, but the stories are usually dreamy, whimsical, romantic or adventurous. Lots of anime comics are based on heroes and villains.

Our story line mainly revolves around our 2 main characters Tairu and Davion. We most have our stuff in the high schools and in the battle field.

We will work on season one here. Whats the main storyline. We need to get the three main villains which is Darsh,Unkown and Ludaro.

The guys name is Hojii, you created him remember? If not look at the last forum we did in the pendent of fame section.

Villains for serious one
Darsh

Hojii

Ludaro

Ok so thats basically them. Ludaro is a ex Gurella weapon person right?

I want to know what you guys think makes a good RPG storyline.
Personally, I like: intrigue, backstabbing, unexpected turns, convoluted plots, tragedy, war, unstoppable odds (as opposed to thunder-god characters), acknoledgement of the limitation of mankind, death of multiple main characters (if not all), political unrest, religious inquisitions and general mayhem.
What I dislike in an RPG storyline: main characters save the world/universe, omni-powerful characters fighting omni-powerful bad-guys, high-minded brow beating morality, childish regression to fairy tales and ANYTHING involving moogles/chokobo/silly hats (aside from killing the aforementioned items). Oh yes, I also dislike children as main characters (adults can't save the world, WHY NOT LET THE CHILDREN DO IT!)

Ludaro is yes and ex-guerrilla gear op g4, which basically means he's a master at all weapons Guerrilla has to offer. But Ludaro was so skill he could form weapon from different galaxys and he could even make a Gauntlet.

as much as I would like to agree with you for the most part, I can't. Personally, I like moogles/chocobos/ctc. Adding new creatures into a title, to me, helps make the game good, since it displays creativity.
What I really like in an RPG plot is deciet, twists (well done twists, not, say, a character you JUST met turning on you... whoo-hoo...), war (absolutely one of my favorite RPG topics; a war-based plot is a good plot), mysticism (why not? A good dose of magic once in a while is a good thing), demons (they creep me out), and, as you mentioned, "acknowledgement of the limitation of mankind." I think that one is uber-important; it's what seperates a believable, realistic story from one that contains ridiculously powerful characters calling dibs on saving the world... again.